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When I was a little baby my sister Losa was holding me.She had to be super careful because if she dropped me she will get in big trouble.Suddenly she started to feel a kick on her arm it was me I was kicking her arm and started to cry and sob.Suddenly her arms started to tremble she was shaking with fear.She couldn’t take it any more until she dropped me on the ground.Wha Whaaaa I started to cry very loudly I think she was trying to stop me crying dad stomped like a big hungry giant.
“Why is she crying on the ground Losa”
Losa trembled with fear
“I ah I ah I dropped her”
My dad shouted “You what!”
“I dropped her”
Bang!!! My sister got a smack from my dad. My sister Losa sobbed and sobbed. She ran as fast as a cheetah to her room.
The End
Hi Leilani, you have used some great descriptive language in this story. I loved the way you said your sisters arms started to tremble! I also like that you chose interesting verbs like stomped and sobbed. I think your sister would have felt very bad about dropping you.
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